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This is where I let it go...

She.
Is the essence of impracticality, impossibility.
But you tie her down to keep her near,
                       and she pretends your ropes can hold her.

To need so direly something so unreal, how can she protest?
[She is only a figment of your imagination] Can you see through the clouds?

The stars themselves have frozen
        And you somehow manage not to notice.

The rose that fails to bloom
                is locked in a perpetual state of ‘almost’  
                      and even in the warmest nights of summer sweet,
        Is edged in a shroud of frost.

And you know she is toxic.
                       (But one more can’t kill you...)

Longing need to drag your fingers across her skin, to taste the ice in her breath,
                      To take her into you   {Pure Blood}
Just once more, please just once more
But it will never be enough, you will always need another

Regardless of how much it burns.
Addiction can be fatal.
©2008-2009 ~White-Rabbit-75
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Ew.

Anywho, regardless of the bad quality, this is for :iconwriteaway:~writeaway's contest - "Addiction"

Hope someone enjoys it.

Inspiration is simply memory. Thankfully, I'm mostly over this addiction. Mostly.
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It's not bad! the imagery is pretty powerful. good luck in the contest (and I hope you will be submitting more writing soon!) =)

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Gone... Fading... Everything... And, all that could have been...
N I N E I N C H N A I L S
locked in a perpetual state of ‘almost’ --- I really like what that says to me :)

Good luck!

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I can understand being mostly over it. :(

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Its not who you are, But what you do... that defines you.
Mostly?

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I like the rose imagery. Lovely!

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This is really well done my dear, :). Shame that the story behind it is true :hug:
Sadly, I don't think I'll ever be over my addiction. :heart:

I love the poem by the way.

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Somehow there's a way
To make everything super-green.

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