Are you aware that you are beautiful?
As I stand here, staring at your soul
Through the Dust in your eyes
[Trace my fingers through it,
Spell out
“Kiss Me”]
Can you see me?
…Oh, what I wouldn’t give.
What I wouldn’t give
To paint myself
With you. (All the colour I’ll ever need)
[Colour coated dustings]
Drip Drip Drip
The paint falls off
Into floating powder
And I dance in the (dry) rain.
Ecstacy
Wishes as I stare into the dust.
Wishing… to drink you
Drink you in, your essence
Radiance
Substance
You.
Consuming liquid dreams
(liquid dreaming you)
[of you]
In silver-gleaming fancies
And star-dusted daydreams
Wishing as I stare into your eyes [the dust in your eyes]
Lay yourself upon me
[lay me down to sleep]
(the way you do in my dreams)
[My world I give to you to keep]
And melt into me
Two minds in one body
[Just like I’ve always wanted]
But only for a moment,
Until the Dust settles.
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I usually don't read text on devart, but the first lines of your poem made me curious, I'd like to read more of you
That makes me very very happy lol
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Have you seen the White Rabbit?
"There is a fear that smells suspiciously like hope."
~~saturnineguise
thanks!!!!
the first three lines are my favourite, because they remind me of...
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Gone... Fading... Everything... And, all that could have been...
N I N E I N C H N A I L S
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Have you seen the White Rabbit?
"There is a fear that smells suspiciously like hope."
~~saturnineguise
this poem is pretty much exactly what I wanted! it describes how I feel exactly =]
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Gone... Fading... Everything... And, all that could have been...
N I N E I N C H N A I L S
your new avatar is scaring the crap out of me though
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The best things in life...aren't things
And star-dusted daydreams"
holy beautiful. i love that image, the feeling... wow.
i really like your style overall, not only in this poem, but in all of them. The side notes? (not called that... the bracted stuff) really adds a freestyle and your personla touch on it.
love love love.
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you can believe in something and still not live up to it.
--- Dr. Wilson, House MD.
Glad you likes it ^.^
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Have you seen the White Rabbit?
"There is a fear that smells suspiciously like hope."
~~saturnineguise
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Its not who you are, But what you do... that defines you.
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